Ladies and Gentlemen, this is Ryan Choi, who served on military for 10 years and participated in government for 8 years as senate. America needs change. Our economics have been falling, people are not fully trusting each other and young talents are drowning by loans for their educations.
To fix economy I will establish new tax law that can be beneficial to both companies and workers. The will help the money flow to unfreeze our economy.
There will be huge scale government scholarship program for students to help their financial struggles.
The government will control the guns, by registering owners and creating restrictions on it.
I will make changes for our country. I will make the difference. Vote for me
Monday, October 31, 2016
Friday, October 28, 2016
Speech Reflection
In overall, I found this speech harder than last "I Am" speech. In "I Am" speech, I knew the material perfectly, because the topic was about who I am. I could easily memorise everything and sounds like professional. However this presidential speech was harder because I do not fully know what I am planning to say. If I was actually running for president than I would have every concept in my head since start, but in this case it was hard to remember all the points that I made from my imagination. Especially, I am not citizen of United States so that made me much challenging to come up with points that I can convince people. I do not share common knowledge with Americans, so I think I spent more time on planning and researching some issues I can mention than actually writing the script. However I love taking challenges so it was enjoyable to me.
I do not think I did well on delivery of speech. First of all, English is not my first language so I do not have perfect pronunciation and fluency as other native speakers. Therefore I think I messed up some words and sentences. I repeated one sentence twice because I did not pronounce one word perfectly, I was trying to put more attention on having clear delivery than body language. The clear delivery is always huge challenge for me and I put lots of focus on it too. I will try my best to make it better.
Also I was reading the script too much and that does not look professional. In this setting of speech, I must look professional and confident. However I was reading too much, so that makes me to look not professional and not confident about my words. I did not memorised the speech well also the content of speech is not a something I am export of. Therefore I found it much harder to memorise my script on presidential speech. I was having wield body language too. I was reading script too much so one of my hand was on phone and I was kept surrounding my phone by my hands often to see the letters clearly. I think I needed to stop doing that. If I remembered the script better, this would not have happened.
I define myself as good public speaker in Korean. Obviously I have better language skill with Korean than English so I can be better public speaker in Korean much easily. I think this class helps me developing my public speaking skill in English. I never learned public speaking skills this professionally, learning all the debate devices to persuade people and keep having practices of public speaking and debates. I feel great to keep getting this professionalized help on my public speaking skill. I think I am developing my public speaking skills pretty well. I might need to participate more during class to get more help.
I do not think I did well on delivery of speech. First of all, English is not my first language so I do not have perfect pronunciation and fluency as other native speakers. Therefore I think I messed up some words and sentences. I repeated one sentence twice because I did not pronounce one word perfectly, I was trying to put more attention on having clear delivery than body language. The clear delivery is always huge challenge for me and I put lots of focus on it too. I will try my best to make it better.
Also I was reading the script too much and that does not look professional. In this setting of speech, I must look professional and confident. However I was reading too much, so that makes me to look not professional and not confident about my words. I did not memorised the speech well also the content of speech is not a something I am export of. Therefore I found it much harder to memorise my script on presidential speech. I was having wield body language too. I was reading script too much so one of my hand was on phone and I was kept surrounding my phone by my hands often to see the letters clearly. I think I needed to stop doing that. If I remembered the script better, this would not have happened.
I define myself as good public speaker in Korean. Obviously I have better language skill with Korean than English so I can be better public speaker in Korean much easily. I think this class helps me developing my public speaking skill in English. I never learned public speaking skills this professionally, learning all the debate devices to persuade people and keep having practices of public speaking and debates. I feel great to keep getting this professionalized help on my public speaking skill. I think I am developing my public speaking skills pretty well. I might need to participate more during class to get more help.
Thursday, October 27, 2016
Sunday, October 23, 2016
Presidential Speech
Ladies and Gentlemen, this is Ryan Choi, who served on military for 10 years and participated in government for 8 years as senate. America needs change. I think this term of time is the most important term. Our economics have been falling, people are not fully trusting each other and young talents drowning by loans for their educations. This is not the country we always wanted to have. This country is falling down and someone should take charge and make changes to rebirth our society. The country has been not developing for more than 10 years. We are falling back. There should be rebirth of our country. I will lead that. I will take the charge of that. I will make changes.
Our economic is falling down. Companies and people are loosing their money because money is not flowing much. The economic is frozen. Companies are not making much money, that led companies to not invest or spend money. To inspire companies I will cut the taxes for companies, but not for all the companies, only to companies keep hiring people and investing money into our community. That will be beneficial to companies, economics and people. When that happens it will be benefits to small businesses too. The money will be invested from big companies and it can help small companies to start developing. It will keep making positive effects on out economic. It will be helpful to our society.
I heard a story of young man, who graduated Purdue University, and he went school by loan. His family was not wealthy enough to financially support him, therefore he did not have options. He loan the money from the bank. He just wanted to learn. However the reality stopped him and gave him struggle that he should not face as 22years old. Schools tuitions must be cheaper or scholarship program must be bigger. I will definitely work on that and find a way on it. I will create government scholarship program to support young students to study without financial concern. It will be supporting both private and public schools.
The citizens are trusting each other that much. There are gun related crimes happening everyday and people are living in fear. This must be stopped. The law should be changed and gun will be controlled. The gun owners must register to our system and they must be qualified to own guns. The purpose of gun in constitution was self-protection, but currently they are being used as weapon pointing our neighbours. This must be stopped.We cannot point each other with guns when there are terrorists coming in and trying to destroy our home. We should unite! There must be restriction to prevent gun usage.
People are not scared of our country anymore. Middle east terrorists are coming into our country and we stopped developing our economics compare to all other countries in the world. We are having dark present now. There should be spark of change to light our future off. The bright future comes from big step from present. Currently our country need big change to face bright future. I will make those changes. I will make the difference. Vote for me.
Our economic is falling down. Companies and people are loosing their money because money is not flowing much. The economic is frozen. Companies are not making much money, that led companies to not invest or spend money. To inspire companies I will cut the taxes for companies, but not for all the companies, only to companies keep hiring people and investing money into our community. That will be beneficial to companies, economics and people. When that happens it will be benefits to small businesses too. The money will be invested from big companies and it can help small companies to start developing. It will keep making positive effects on out economic. It will be helpful to our society.
I heard a story of young man, who graduated Purdue University, and he went school by loan. His family was not wealthy enough to financially support him, therefore he did not have options. He loan the money from the bank. He just wanted to learn. However the reality stopped him and gave him struggle that he should not face as 22years old. Schools tuitions must be cheaper or scholarship program must be bigger. I will definitely work on that and find a way on it. I will create government scholarship program to support young students to study without financial concern. It will be supporting both private and public schools.
The citizens are trusting each other that much. There are gun related crimes happening everyday and people are living in fear. This must be stopped. The law should be changed and gun will be controlled. The gun owners must register to our system and they must be qualified to own guns. The purpose of gun in constitution was self-protection, but currently they are being used as weapon pointing our neighbours. This must be stopped.We cannot point each other with guns when there are terrorists coming in and trying to destroy our home. We should unite! There must be restriction to prevent gun usage.
People are not scared of our country anymore. Middle east terrorists are coming into our country and we stopped developing our economics compare to all other countries in the world. We are having dark present now. There should be spark of change to light our future off. The bright future comes from big step from present. Currently our country need big change to face bright future. I will make those changes. I will make the difference. Vote for me.
Thursday, October 20, 2016
Presidential Debate NotesT
This presidential debate between Donald Trump and Hilray Clinton was well controlled by modiater. Both candidates expressed their opinions pretty well and there were not many interruptions. They both stayed calm. Trump did not have much facts to fully strengthen his arguments and Clinton was having too much facts. Clinton was keep sayimg the word "so" and relying on her own facts too much. Trump was having too much flase assumptions and not clering or proving the facts. It is really hard to think either side dominate the debate, because both of them were doing quite badly and it wasn't impressive. They bith used lots of ad haureans and fakse fallacy alot to attack each other.
Thursday, October 13, 2016
Presidential Debate 3 Notes
In 3rd presidential debate, Hilary Clinton and Donald Trump was debating, in fact they were arguing. There were lots of loaded question and ad houraun. I think both candidates were trying to attack each other more than having proper debate about their politics.
Hilary Clinton was being disrespectful to Donal Trump. She was attacking about his background more than his policies. However Donal Trump was being much respectful than Hilary, which was quite surprising.
I think the debate was mass, it was brutal to watch. Both of candidates were not being formal, too aggressive. I think why Hilary were being aggressive, because she was too scripted on first debate, it might be good idea to have totally different attitude but it was too much. She was too aggressive.
Hilary Clinton was being disrespectful to Donal Trump. She was attacking about his background more than his policies. However Donal Trump was being much respectful than Hilary, which was quite surprising.
I think the debate was mass, it was brutal to watch. Both of candidates were not being formal, too aggressive. I think why Hilary were being aggressive, because she was too scripted on first debate, it might be good idea to have totally different attitude but it was too much. She was too aggressive.
Wednesday, October 12, 2016
Debate Analysis
1) There were not much concession or reputation in this debate. Trump and Clinton used lots of appealto authority and ad houraun. Trump and Clinton were appealing to authority to show the audience that his or her oponion is right and they should follow it. This helped them to convince some of audience to be on their sides. President is role having lots of power in country so candidates needed to have their opinion to prove. In that process both candidates used lots of appeal to authority. Also both candidates used as houraum to attack each other. They were attacking each other with nit proved information and making points with false facts.
2) i think Donald Trump is not a good debate speaker. On the first debate Donald Trump tend to destract Clinton and interupted alot when Clinton was speaking. The big moment was when Clinton started talking about how Trump was not paying taxes, and Trump was keep saying "wrong" and keep putting Clinton on a position of liar. That helped Trump to build up his argument when he countered Clinton about her private email. There were rumors saying that Clinton was sending emails on private server and there are possibilities that emails have classified information include. It was ckeary Clinton's blunder to point out Trump with not fact-checked information.
Donald Trump also made blunder on second debate, which was attaching Clinton with line "Then You would be in the jail". That was extremely risky line to say. That was very offensive and disrespectful to Clinton. She is also candidate of president election and Truml cannot say that kind of things. Even Clinton was attacking Trump about his background, no experience on politics and born in rich family, that does not give him any power to say that much harshy offensive words. Trump made this blender and also made audience to laugh at him for say that. It is true that Trump dies not have any experience on politics and Clinton was pointing out why did you nit contribute ti any political situation if you felt the systm is wrong. He attacked Clinton that if his officers or he was working for government there will be change. Therefore Trump response that if his officiers were working for government then Clinton will be in the jail. That is not something candidate says to other candidate. It was very offensive and definitely blunder.
2) i think Donald Trump is not a good debate speaker. On the first debate Donald Trump tend to destract Clinton and interupted alot when Clinton was speaking. The big moment was when Clinton started talking about how Trump was not paying taxes, and Trump was keep saying "wrong" and keep putting Clinton on a position of liar. That helped Trump to build up his argument when he countered Clinton about her private email. There were rumors saying that Clinton was sending emails on private server and there are possibilities that emails have classified information include. It was ckeary Clinton's blunder to point out Trump with not fact-checked information.
Donald Trump also made blunder on second debate, which was attaching Clinton with line "Then You would be in the jail". That was extremely risky line to say. That was very offensive and disrespectful to Clinton. She is also candidate of president election and Truml cannot say that kind of things. Even Clinton was attacking Trump about his background, no experience on politics and born in rich family, that does not give him any power to say that much harshy offensive words. Trump made this blender and also made audience to laugh at him for say that. It is true that Trump dies not have any experience on politics and Clinton was pointing out why did you nit contribute ti any political situation if you felt the systm is wrong. He attacked Clinton that if his officers or he was working for government there will be change. Therefore Trump response that if his officiers were working for government then Clinton will be in the jail. That is not something candidate says to other candidate. It was very offensive and definitely blunder.
Tuesday, October 4, 2016
Debate Topics
1. Should abortion be legal?
2. Should school require students ti wear uniform or dress codes?
3. Which candidate will win 2016 presidential election?
4. Can college athletes be sponsored?
5. Which team will win 2016 World Series?
2. Should school require students ti wear uniform or dress codes?
3. Which candidate will win 2016 presidential election?
4. Can college athletes be sponsored?
5. Which team will win 2016 World Series?
Monday, October 3, 2016
Logical Fallacies
loaded Question
Questions containing uncontroversial or unjustified assumption
http://study.com/academy/lesson/loaded-question-definition-examples.html
Questions containing uncontroversial or unjustified assumption
http://study.com/academy/lesson/loaded-question-definition-examples.html
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