Wednesday, December 14, 2016

I Believe Speech Delivery

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g4QuL2Oym64&ab_channel=SooyoungChoi



To be honest, I think this "I Believe" project was really helpful to look back at on my life to think of interesting topic that I want to share. At first place, I had totally different topic in my mind but I changed to story with T.J Warren at last. Basically the biggest struggle through this project was that I needed to write whole new speech in a week. I was very familiar with the topic and what I am going to write about but it is always hard to put everything into words, especially for me, not native English speaker. However I think I did fine in overall, putting the main massage of my speech well, staying humble and work hard for the others. I think I did quite solid job on delivering the massage.

The first thing I struggled most about the writing the speech was coming out with the better method of spreading my massage. My speech had one story and the main massage and theme of the whole speech comes out from that story. It was the matter of how I am going to word his massage and the method of strengthen his massage. So I came up with an idea of putting my own reflection of the massage. It was not that hard to put in because his massage actually effected a lot on my life therefore I was able to express my opinion on his massage pretty well. It is kinda true that I came out with different style of appreciation of life than T.J Warren but I thought the overall massage is same. Therefore I putted my reflection of his massage and I think that strengthen the power of his massage pretty well, which making the whole speech to be much stronger.

The second thing I spent lots of time on it was how I am going to have good ending. This speech is talking about one of the most effective massage in my life, which changed view point of my life. I brainstormed how I am going to put it and came up with a thought that T.J Warren would not remember me. I was just a kid from his old school who was interested in listening some life stories of him. I think it was very reasonable to think that he will not remember meeting me. Throughout that thought I came out with a ending that imagining he will not but if I have a chance to meet him in person I will be thanking him for teaching me that great lesson I will never forget in my life. That ends up my essay with huge ending which helped me to leave last strong impression of my whole essay.

This "I Believe" speech helped me to have lots of thinkings of my life, thinking back about my past and some massages I want to deliver to others. I think I've lived quite unique life, which gives me lots of ideas about what I want to talk about. I am really satisfied about what I talked about and hope my speech can help some of others to look into their life in different way.


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